Chulo

Posts: 11

Jun 11th 2008 @ 10:53am | #1

Hmmm, (rubs chin). I think I can see where you wanted the humour, but I
think you missed the mark and only managed to make a stereotype of black
males more solid. It was nowhere nearly as smart as it could have been,
but the bones are there for a good comedy.

I really love the the first scene. That was quite funny and a good set
up, I was looking forward to what you were going to do, then it was
spollt for me. The music was excellent, I think the middle bit with you
guys pretending to be "black guys' needed a track change at some point,
the same tune went on for too long.

All in all, you guys have talent and if you think a little more and be
more constructive in what you are trying to do, I think you could do
very well in this.

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TG989

Posts: 132

Jun 12th 2008 @ 11:35am | #2

I personally found it quite funny albeit not so true.

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